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Be gentle… it’s my first time…

03 Monday Dec 2012

Posted by D.A Lascelles in Publicity

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#amwriting, Amazon, BBW Romance writers, books, Goodreads, mundania press, Pirates and Swashbucklers, productivity, Publication, Pulp Empires, reviews, writing


I was recently informed of a positive review of Transitions. Actually, I was informed of Transitions-AuthorCopythis review a few weeks ago, but am only just getting round to posting about it now. With an event to help organise (or at least provide moral support for), real world work to plan and my insane idea to do Nano this year (that’s a whole different post…) I was actually finding it hard to do much serious blogging last month. There was also the fact that the link I was sent to the review does not actually seem to go to a page that includes my review. I was not sure if this meant my review was yet to be published, was lost deep in an archive or was only visible during the third quarter of the full moon when the month has an F in it and is more than 28 days… So, I didn’t want to post anything about it until I got some form of confirmation.

But now November is over, the event was this weekend gone and Nano is also a thing of the past. I do still have real world work to do but my time is a little freer than it was. Ok, I still cannot find the actual review (if anyone can help, I’d appreciate it) but what the hell…

So, the lovely people over at Penumbra Press sometimes review books by other publishers and they decided to pick up mine (the full review is allegedly in their reviews section but I cannot find it). The fragment of the full review that was sent to me is fairly promising, however. It included:

“Throughout this story D. A. Lascelles artfully uses his skills with words to magically paint images in the reader’s head. Not only do places come into clear focus, but the seasons and atmosphere of the locations are also imbued with a descriptive clarity and realistic essence.

Written for paranormal romance fans of all ages, Transitions successfully marries modern day and roman Britain by interspersing the memories and history of roman officer Lucius Gaius with the ordinarily mundane lives of two university students…Transitions is a fair read that will keep you occupied, even if only for a day trip away.”

And the score was apparently ‘3 books’. I am assuming and hoping that this is out of 5 and not, for example, 500 🙂

This is, in fact, the first review I have ever had. For anything. By anyone who was not a friend or family member, anyway. So far both Transitions and Pirates and Swashbucklers have avoided reviews in places like Goodreads and Amazon though Pirates seems to have been marked as ‘to read’ by a lot of people. So, as a first go at the review wheel I am happy with this result. There will likely be bad ones out there too, not that I have found any yet, so it is good to start on a positive note. Plus, my ego is telling me that I should get that first paragraph printed on a T-shirt because I really like it. A lot.

Luckily, I rarely listen to my ego.

UK Appreciation Month – Why the UK is Doomed

27 Tuesday Nov 2012

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Avengers, Avengers Assemble, Bookaholics Book Club, books, entertainment, film, guest blogging, guest posts, hellblazer comics, Joss Whedon, Misfits, Superhero, writing


So, in October I was asked to contribute to a series on this blog (the Bookaholics book club blog) and since I had just been watching Avengers and Misfits in the same week and had been idly browsing some old Hellblazer comics the following thought occured to me:

http://bookaholicsbkcl.blogspot.co.uk/2012/11/uk-appreciation-month-da-lascelles.html#.UKYSdlaRmbg.twitter

Because, lets be fair here, UK superheroes aren’t really up to much at all, are they?

Unless someone has some counter arguments to this? Feel free to comment if you do….

The Next Big Thing

22 Thursday Nov 2012

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books, Christopher Ecclestone, David Tennant, Demons, Gods of the Deep, gods of the sea, Keira Knightly, Metahuman Press, Michael Moorcock, Michelle Dockery, Pirates, Pirates and Swashbucklers, Publication, writing


So, I got tagged in this meme thing by Melinda Dozier (you should totally go and check out her site…) the point of which is to answer questions about your work in progress.

Here are the rules:
1) Answer the questions.
2) Tag 5 other
writers, providing the links.
3) Let the writer’s know you tagged them.

What is the working title of Your Book?

Gods of the Deep is the current working title, which is a step up from ‘Un-named sequel’ which was its previous working title. It was chosen to fit in with the previous published story which was Gods of the Sea.


Where did the idea come from for the book?

The idea for Gods of the Sea came from a LRP game I used to play (now long defunct). I decided I wanted to tell the origin story of how two of the characters met so one Christmas I got out my laptop and tapped out a few thousand words and sent it to a publisher who I knew were looking for ‘pirate stories’. It got picked up and published in the Pirates and Swashbucklers anthology. No one was more surprised at this than me.

Then, earlier this year, the publisher contacted me and as a result of that discussion the concept of ‘Gods of the Deep’ was produced – an anthology of short stories set in the same world as Gods of the Sea, including both a reprint of Gods of the Sea and some form of sequel. Again, I was surprised.

 

What genre does your book fall under?
It’s mainly fantasy with some pulp elements. And Pirates, Because you’ve got to have pirates…

Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie?

Many years before I’d even considered writing Gods of the Sea, one of the organisers of the LRP game told me that they believed Professor Everyn Crowe should be played by Christopher Ecclestone. Not sure I quite agree with that assessment but I am hard pressed to find an appropriate alternative. Someone like David Tennant would be good too but I am not sure if that is not just me showing my Doctor Who geekery. Of course there is also the fact that any casting choice may have to take into account Everyn’s foreign nature as he is supposed to  have a ‘Mediterranean’ look but that has never stopped Hollywood in the past before.

Captain Rachel Drake obviously has to be played by a strong, British woman. Downton Abbey’s Michelle Dockery (Lady Mary Crawley) is a possibility but there are a few other actors who would be excellent in that role. I think there may, however, be a general call for ‘anyone other than Keira Knightly’ which I agree with…

How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?

I am still writing it so no idea. Am hoping to get it finished soon, though. It is my Nano project and completion of it is the target I have set myself for this month. However, Nano style writing is different to how I usually do things. The concept of splurging words onto the page in order to acheive a word count target and worrying about the editing later is alien to me. I prefer a slower method with less faff afterwards. However, slower methods do not let you reach deadlines so easily.

Gods of the Sea was written in a number of days, however. And not whole days, either. A few hours each day in between doing other things. Possibly the fastest I have ever written anything intended for publication that actually got published.

What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?

 One of my crit partners did say that Gods of the Sea read a little like a Michael Moorcock story and I have been strongly influenced in the past by his work, specifically the Elric novels. So I suppose you could say that the closest comparison to Gods of the Deep would be a Michael Moorcock story in style if not in the features of the story. The fact that Gods of the Sea and Gods of the Deep are shorter fiction (Gods of the Sea is a short, Gods of the Deep a novella) which have a direct continuity with each other also fits the pattern of early Moorcock, where one novel was comprised of several shorter stories that directly followed on from each other.

Who or What inspired you to write this book?

The main inspiration for the story came from the LRP game, Adventures in the Arcroc, which I played many many years ago. The Arcroc was the name of a fantasy world with a technology level roughly somewhere between 1600’s and 1800’s. It’s not particularly precise in its historical comparison because there are elements from all over history thrown in there, but the history is also an inspiration as are stories of swashbucklers and pirates and adventures at sea – anything from Sinbad to Hornblower and Pirates of the Carribean.

What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest? How about a teaser?

There are demons… and a scene I love where Everyn runs to Rachel’s rescue, thinking he is the only one who can save her from assasination, only to find when he gets there that she has quite happily rescued herself and is now being rather suave about it in an ‘injury? What injury? Oh this? Just a scratch…’ sort of way.

“But…” he stammered. “The demon…” He waved the horse statue in the air in front of his face. “I’m here to… banish it.”

“Banish it?” She smiled as she checked the length of the blade for nicks and scratches. “No need, everything is under control.”

“But, the only way you could have banished that demon was to have empowered a suitable vessel with the correct incantations and blessings and trapped its incorporeal essence therein…”

“Not the only way, no.” As the dressing on her wound was completed, she stood and tested her weight on the leg, wincing slightly as she did so.

“Well, no, you could have physically ablated its physical form using brute force but generally such creatures are immune to most forms of weapon. Many can only be harmed by a blessed weapon or something composed of an alloy with a significant quantity of silver.”

“Hmmmmm, yes….” She held the sword up, letting the light fall on its shiny surface and reflecting on her face. “Silver alloys. I wonder where someone with my wealth could get hold of something like that?”

And so there you have it…. now to spread the infection…

I am tagging:

R.A Smith

Ninfa Hayes

Erica Hayes

Marie Roberts

And… YOU, Yes, you over there, the writer who is reading this. If you want to do the next big thing challenge, feel free to consider yourself tagged by me, just make sure you link back to me when you do…

[AW blog chain] Otherworldly

19 Friday Oct 2012

Posted by D.A Lascelles in Musings

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Absolute Write, books, contemporary literature, google images search, Gritty realism, literature, Otherworldly, Real world, realistic portrayal, supernatural elements, writing


This month’s blog chain title is sort of inevitable, Otherworldly talks about things beyond our ken, creatures from other worlds or dimensions. Ghosties, ghoulies and long leggity beasties. It can also refer to alien worlds or wyrd dimensions. There is a lot if scope in this topic.

With all this Gritty Realism about, it is best to have a BIG gun to hand

A question I always ask myself is ‘how finely can you slice alternate dimensions?’ At what point can you say that a particular setting is ‘the real world’ rather than some alternate dimension where things are different?

The answer to that may seem easy – the ‘real world’ is where things happen exactly as they would in the real world. There are no supernatural elements, it is a contemporary setting and the writer has taken great pains to represent a realistic portrayal of the world as it is. This is certainly one possible argument and one which has a lot to support it. I imagine most people reading this will have no issues with this interpretation and to be honest, neither do I. However, I do have an alternative opinion I would like to present:

There no such thing as ‘reality’ in fiction.

Think about that for a while. Yes, writers have striven to represent reality in various different ways. We have had ever darker and grittier portrayals of various aspects of life, all with the aim of ‘showing things like they really are’. However, you have to ask how real that really is. Writers are first and foremost entertainers and entertainers have to entertain. As a result of this requirement, reality sometimes has to take a back seat or even be replaced by something claiming to be it. Just try to type ‘Gritty Realism’ into a Google images search and see what you get. The results may surprise you. It certainly gives an insight into what creative types beleive ‘realism’ is – guns, drugs and, bizarrely, Super Mario…

Douglas Adams put it rather well when he told us about Arthur Dent’s morning in one of his books… Readers do not want to hear about how a character brushes his teeth or how she combs her hair or any one of hundreds of minor acts everyone performs every day in the course of thier lives. They do not want that level of detail unless, and this is important, there is something unusual about that activity which may have a bearing on the plot. If, for example, a character picks up the wrong toothbrush and another character notices this and has paranoid thoughts about whether they really are who they claim to be.

Too much reality, therefore, is an impedence to entertainment. A writer should only be presenting to the reader the things that are relevant to the plot, interesting things that happen. The reality of many people is not interesting enough to portray in writing. Novels, films and TV shows use a ‘normal life’ as a contrast. Our hero begins the story in relative normalcy and then is quickly taken from there into whatever adventures the plot has in store for them. Ideally, you want to make these periods of normal life relatively short lest the reader gets bored waiting for the plot to happen and also insert the occasional little sting to hint at the things to come in order to keep them reading. Arthur Dent’s normal life lasts for approximately two paragraphs before a bulldozer tries to demolish his house and it is not many pages from there to a surreal conversation with Ford in the pub and teleportation onto one of the ships sent to destroy the earth.

And it does not end with sci fi and fantasy. Even in contemporary literature you never see a character undergoing a normal day. There is always some imperative to drive them forward such as a death in the family or a messy relationship which means that they are not undergoing the same sort of normal day the rest of us poor non-characters in literature endure. This is not only the case with literature but also with any narrative form such as TV, movies and theatre. Which leads me back to the original question – these ‘realistic portrayals’ are in fact nothing of the sort. Each universe presented is an alternate dimension to our ‘real’ one. The differences may be explicit (the earth being destroyed by an alien construction fleet) or subtle (the existence of fictional characters in a world otherwise identical to our own) but they are there. The presence of ‘gritty realism’ does not make your fictional world any more real and in fact may make the contrast ever more obvious by highlighting an issue such as drug abuse, rape or violence and exaggerating it for the purposes of entertainment.

So, it may be time to accept that while art may reflect life, it is always going to be a rather distorted reflection as we emphasise elements we consider to be ‘entertaining’ and devalue those which are considered mundane.

OK, chaps, this is a blog chain and so you have to do your duty by God, King and country by contributing to the other blogs on the list. If you don’t, then we will come round your house and kidnap you and put you in the Big Brother house or, worse, on X Factor. You can then experience all the Gritty Realism you like…

Participants and posts:
Ralph Pines: http://ralfast.wordpress.com (post link here)
randi.lee: http://emotionalnovel.blogspot.com (post link
here
)
Aranenvo: http://www.simonpclark.com (post link here)
pyrosama: http://matrix-hole.blogspot.com (post link here)
hilaryjacques: http://hillaryjacques.blogspot.com (post link here)
meowzbark: http://erlessard.wordpress.com (post link here)
slcboston: http://fleasof1000camels.blogspot.com (post link here)
areteus: https://lurkingmusings.wordpress.com (post link
here)
bearilou: http://theglassopossum.wordpress.com (post link
here)
dolores haze: http://dianedooley.wordpress.com (post link
here)
SuzanneSeese: http://viewofsue.blogspot.com (post link here)
bmadsen: http://hospitaloflife.wordpress.com (post link here)
Linda
Adams: http://garridon.wordpress.com (post link here)
Alynza: http://www.alynzasmith.blogspot.com (post link here)
Orion
mk3: http://nonexistentbooks.wordpress.com (post link
here)
BBBurke: http://awritersprogression.blogspot.com (post link
here)
SRHowen: http://srhowen1.blogspot.com (post link here)
Damina Rucci:
http://thegraypen.wordpress.com (post link
here)
CJMichaels: http://christinajmichaels.blogspot.com (post link
here)
wonderactivist: http://luciesmoker.wordpress.com (post link here)
Lady Cat:
http://carolsrandomness.blogspot.ca (post link
here)
xcomplex: http://arielemerald.blogspot.com (post link
here)
debranneelliot: http://www.debragrayelliott.blogspot.com (post link here)

Fantasy Writing contest: The results

11 Thursday Oct 2012

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BBW Romance writers, beneficial side effect, books, final sacrifice, gods of the sea, novel length, Pirates and Swashbucklers, productivity, Publication, short novel, writing


Well, the results are in for the contest I entered:

http://fantasywritingcontest.com/category/judges/

As you can see, I am not on the short list. Not an unexpected result as there were a lot of high quality writers entering this. So, not too disappointed about the result and, in actual fact, there is a beneficial side effect from failing to get a place in the contest. I have another use for the story I submitted – a story about an old woman with a magical dagger called The Final Sacrifice.

A few months ago, I was asked to follow up Gods of the Sea*. I agreed to do a novella and a series of shorts to make up a short novel length anthology. I’ve been working on that ever since, whenever I get the time to write. When I was considering what stories I had already written which had yet to be published could be included in this anthology, The Final Sacrifice stood out as one which could definitely fit the brief. I am therefore actually quite pleased that there are now 4000 words I do not have to fill with another story as yet unwritten…

So, my writing plans over the next few months involve plugging away at this new anthology. Currently about half way through…

In the meantime, while you are waiting for me to actually get round to finishing this anthology, you can still enjoy my paranormal romance Transitions… It has Romans in it. And Goths. But not the Barbarian tribe… You can also still get a free copy of The Curse. It has Witches in it. Well, mad prophetic dreams…

* And it seems it has reappeared in paperback on Amazon again….

Reposted: The Mighty Red Pen of Justice

25 Tuesday Sep 2012

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#amwriting, books, editors, guest blogging, guest posts, letter of acceptance, literacy in primary schools, new experiences, random insanity, reviews, sign contract, writing


Ok, here is a copy-paste of my article from the Amwriting blog on editors and the love-hate relationship we have with them. Warning: It may contain incoherence and random insanity.

Inevitably, the nature of my blogging at the moment will revolve around new experiences. There is also likely to be a certain element of comparison of the writing life to that of a teacher. This entry is no exception….

Your friendly neighbourhood editorial team

Near the end of August (the 21st to be precise) my first novella, Transitions, is due for release. Up until now, my publishing record has been somewhat thin –a single short story in an anthology – but this release makes things a little more ‘official’. With the short story, the process was relatively simple – submit story, get letter of acceptance, get contract, sign contract and then wait for the process of publication to take place. I reviewed some proofs at one point and got sent the cover to go ‘oooh’ over but apart from that I had little involvement.

With Transitions it was a whole different ball game. With Transitions I had to deal with the most feared creature ever to walk the hallowed halls of any publisher… The Editor.

Writers have a love-hate relationship with their editors. On the one hand, the fact you have been assigned one at all means the work you have submitted meets that publisher’s standards, i.e. you are good enough to be published. They would not bother if your work was unmitigated tripe, you’d have been booted out the rejection door as soon as they looked at you (and, in fact, even a work that is up to the standard may get this treatment too…). On the other hand, you hate your editor because they are the person who criticises your work minutely, pulling at all the little flaws in your writing style and, possibly more horrifically, imposing upon you the dreaded changes that the publisher feels are needed. Now, don’t deny it…. I can see through your protestations that you co-operate with your editor and don’t mind the changes. Come on, admit it. Deep down, maybe hidden where no one but you knows it is there, you have that little ball of resentment. That little voice which says ‘but this is my baby, I worked hard at this, you can’t be so brutal to it you mean old person you!’ To paraphrase Pratchett, handing your work over to an editor is sometimes like bringing up a cute little pony, nurturing it, loving it, making it one of your family and then handing it over to a new owner and watching them ride off on it using spurs and a whip.

A renowned editor demonstrates the essential skills required at a recent editing conference.

I like to think I was lucky with my editor because I knew her before she was assigned. Well, I’d reviewed one of her books on epublish a book and she’d emailed me to thank me. So I knew that she knew what she was on about and we had a rapport already and that is always a good start.  I wasn’t too concerned when the file with her comments in it dropped into my inbox. Except that I had forgotten one thing…

You see, I actually wrote Transitions more than 5 years ago. Since then I have changed significantly as a writer, worked hard to lose some terrible bad habits and one thing my editor showed me was exactly how far I had improved. There were significant errors – point of view shifts, tense shifts, purple prose, repeated words… the list went on. Thing is, new improved writer me agreed emphatically with every single change because I knew that had I read them in a book I was reviewing or editing I would be scathing. However, at the back of my mind, naive young writer me was still there going ‘NO!!!!!!!! You cannot mess with a masterpiece of this quality you insane bitch!!!!!! All the quirks are there for perfectly respectable and reasonable reasons!!!!* Aieeeeeeeee!!!! I kill you!!!!!’**

Luckily, new improved writer me got together with sensible me and beat the living poop out of naive young writer me before any of those sentiments could express themselves in e-mails to the editor. I made the changes*** and was happy to do it because, frankly, you do what your editor says and then thank them for doing it. Reading over the completed work, I am glad that I did because the work is improved overall and has a definite professional sheen.

So, what has that got to do with teaching? I did say I would try to shoehorn that in somehow. Well, here’s a thing. Schools, especially primary schools where the fundamentals of the skill we call writing are first picked up, aren’t actually all that big on editing. They work hard on writing skills – grammar, spelling, punctuation, structure, all that malarkey but once a pupil hands in a completed piece of work at the end of the lesson that is it. They get it marked and returned with some comments but they do not get the chance to act on those comments save by not making the same mistakes in a future piece of work. Whatever mark they get for that work is what gets recorded. So, for pupils in schools there is a lot of pressure to get it right first time and no real experience of the subtle give and take of discussion between a writer and editor where perfection is attempted by a consensual process. The process of editing Transitions underwent consisted of several rounds, each one coming closer to the editor’s ideal. The pieces of work I have marked in my time teaching will never achieve that because they are forever locked in an exercise book, stuck in the same form they were when handed in with only my comments hinting at their potential. I do wonder if schools are not missing out on an important lesson in literacy – the importance of critical review and editing on achieving perfection in writing. Not getting it right first time is not a failure, just a single step along the path to your goal. Those who doubt the importance of editors should maybe take a look at some of the original first draft manuscripts by famous authors****. They can be very revealing about the changes most novels go through to get published. So, in conclusion, respect your editor and make sure you listen to what they say and when they spank your arse with a massive sheaf of notes pointing out all your shortcomings, be sure to say ‘Thank you, Ma’am, please may I have another’. It’s for your own good, after all.

*They weren’t, they really weren’t. They were the literary equivalent to masturbation – showy and flashy and not actually achieving much other than self gratification.

**Naive young writer me was always one for over use of alliteration. And overuse of exclamation marks. Not to mention extreme arrogance. Most of these traits have been firmly beaten out of my now.

*** Yes, even the one I struggled with because I had English characters in England using an English colloquialism that needed to be removed because Americans would have problems understanding it… That one *hurt*

**** Like the Photograph of the first page of the first draft manuscript of Lord of the Rings which can be seen inside one of Tolkien’s biographies (can’t remember which one, it was many years ago I saw it). It is hardly a clean and well structured piece of literature. Seeing that as a child gave me insight into how even a great writer often starts out with something that needs a lot of polishing before it is publishable.

Free book!

16 Sunday Sep 2012

Posted by D.A Lascelles in Musings, Publicity

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Amazon, BBW Romance writers, Blog Anniversary, blue moons, books, Jen Thompson, Judy Bagshaw, Julie Schriver, M.S Fowle, paranormal romance, Paranormal Romance Anthology, Publication, Shades of Love, Skyla Dawn Cameron, The Curse, Transitions, virtual shelves


This coming week sees a very special occasion in literature, an occasion that occurs once in every 10 blue moons (often referred to as a decabluemoon) and an event that is celebrated the world over by people in all walks of life*…

Yes, that is right, it is the first anniversary of the start of this blog on the 18th of September.

Almost one year ago (on the 18th September, 2011), I finally bowed to overwhelming pressure from my own ego to make my innermost thoughts public. It is also almost a year ago that my first publication hit the virtual shelves. With my second publication now out there in the world, it seems a good time to do a freebie giveaway.

So, now you can claim your absolutely free copy of The Curse. Just click this link!

What is The Curse, I hear you ask? Well, that is a very good question. When the BBW Romance Writers were getting together to write the Paranormal Romance Anthology that became known as Shades of Love and which Transitions is a part, we also decided to do what is known as a Round Robin story. This is a story where a group of writers collaborate on it. We decided on a broad story idea (a woman cursed with the gift of prophesy) then each of us took turns to write a section each, leaving the next person with a situation to resolve. This was done until we reached the natural climax. Then Judy Bagshaw and myself did a final polish on the story to make it publishable and were forced to learn more than we really wanted to learn about Creative Commons licenses.

The whole was topped off with a rather wonderful cover*** (pictured) created by the excellent M.S Fowle who deserves a lot of kudos for her efforts at making our writing look like a ‘proper book’. If you ever have a book you need a cover for, I would definitely suggest you consider talking to her about it.

So, that was how it came to pass that we happened to have a free ebook available to give to you all. Go on, click that link and download the Zip file that contains versions of this book for many different ebook formats. Then try to guess which of the authors wrote which of the bits….

* Well, Ok, it occurs once a year and is probably celebrated by very few people and not the world over** but don’t tell my ego that, please, it does enjoy its little illusions and gets stroppy when it is thwarted.

** Though I do have a special shout out to those of you in Panama, Peurto Rico and the Ukraine who seem very interested in what I am saying here *waves*

*** Actually, she made us three covers, that is how dedicated she is. If I can get permission from her, I will post the other two covers for you to look at ‘what could have been’.

[Guest Post] How do I write a book? By Andi Katsina

06 Thursday Sep 2012

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Today’s guest post comes to you from Andi Katsina, a British born writer who has spent a lot of her life in Manchester but who now lives in Panama… later there will be an interview with her and her full bio. For now, however, here is an article aimed at absolute beginners – the basic fundamentals of novel writing with some tips on how to make it seem easy.

How do I write a book?

By Andi Katsina

Countless readers have told me they too have a great idea for a story, and have wanted to write a book for a very long time. My reply to them all is the same; you can do it if you really want to! More often than not that reply is often met with the admittance, ‘I do want to, but I don’t know how to go about it.’ To all of you who really do want to write a book but don’t know how, this is for you.

First and foremost, don’t be overwhelmed by the prospect! Secondly, believe that you can do it!

So let’s take it from there….

Having developed your idea into a coherent stream, you must further mold it into a story. Giving it a beginning, middle and ending is the easiest approach. Using material for a topic you have a strong desire to talk about can also make this first stage easy to achieve.

Now, if you have your idea but don’t yet have an ending, fear not. Start with what you have, be that a ‘beginning’ or a ‘middle’. You have your story, or part thereof, now you must organize it into an order that will afford the reader the greatest understanding.

A good way of keeping your story on target, getting from the beginning to the ending, is to use chapter headings. At this stage in the process don’t be worried if you don’t have any chapters, simply think about your story and the logical way you want to relay it. There’ll be naturally divisible sections, places where you can break the story down; possibly a change of location, change of activity or the introduction of new characters. These things don’t always warrant a new chapter, but if you’re struggling to find suitable breaks in the story, these can be good chapter openers. As for those of you who do have chapters, you’re well on the way.

So, make a list of your chapter headings, numbering and naming each one. Yep, do not worry if you don’t have names for your chapters, if you do have, you’re almost ready to write. No chapter names? Then just go with numbers. Really guys, if you want to write a book, let’s eliminate the things that you think are there to stop you .

I personally think this next part of the process will really put you on the road to writing your first book. It’s very easy, though I ought to mention at this point that there’s a wide array of techniques  writers can choose from in order to get set up to write their next book. The method detailed here is extremely easy and you can do it, if you really do want to write a book.

Choose a word processing program, Open Office  (free), Microsoft etc. Open up a new blank document and then write in big bold letters, the title of your story, aligned in the centre of the page. Directly underneath that write, by  your name.  Insert lots of paragraph spaces and then type the word; Chapters, large, bold and aligned to the left of the page. Below this word insert your list of chapters with number and names. I tell ya’, that’s gonna look good, and it’s going to make you feel as though you’re about to create something rather special. At this stage you shouldn’t be concerned with formatting, sales, promotion or readership. These aren’t the considerations that drive real writers, a genuine writer writes to tell the story. We are storytellers. Everything else, apart from formatting, is a bonus.

Of course formatting will come into play, importantly so. However, if you’re new to all of this, then I strongly advise you to leave it aside until you finish your book. Wrestling with an unfamiliar word processing program can be time consuming, and if you haven’t even started writing, it can throw a spanner in the works and put you off ‘lifting the pen’. Maintain a standard amount of formatting as you type, this is easy to do, and please ensure you use page numbers. Admittedly if you’ve only written ten or so pages, you can scroll back and forth if you need to recheck a sentence. However, if you have fifty, a hundred, or a hundred and fifty pages, trying to scroll through your manuscript without page numbers… you get the message. To insert page numbers, go to the ‘insert’ tab along the very top of the screen, in between view and format, usually, you should find the insert page numbers option under that menu. Another tip, just a thought, if you do need to find something, a word, phrase or sentence; go ahead and use the ‘find’ facility, usually ctrl + F will bring this up for you.

If you want to dedicate your work, make a space in between by your name and Chapters, insert Dedicated to ——. The best way to do this is to use separate pages, but this is not essential.

Now, insert more paragraph spaces taking you way below the list of chapters, or simply break to the next page and type Chapter 1 in big bold letters. Underneath that, also in big letters, you can write the name of the chapter. No name yet? No problem, simply insert a short line of dashes, each time you see the dashes it will spur you on to coming up with a chapter name.

So as to be forward thinking, and also to give yourself a sense of progression, insert a load more paragraph spaces and then write Chapter 2, again in big bold letters, and again underneath that write the name of the chapter, or dashes. Repeat this until you have a tidy row, with big spaces in between, of the chapters, number and name, or dashes. For the last chapter, you can write the chapter number + Conclusion, if you like, again insert the chapter name, or dashes, immediately below.

Amazingly simple. You now have the basic structure of your manuscript, showing the beginning, middle and ending of your book. Let me show you an example:

Rick & Wylie’s Fantastical, Magical Adventures book 1

:: by Andi Katsina ::

Dedicated to ::

Chapters (Contents)

1) Dad!

2) Hawaii

3)….

:: Chapter 1 Dad! = write the text for this chapter here

:: Chapter 2 Hawaii = write the text for this chapter here, and so on until all the chapters are completed….

:: Chapter 12 The Vupan Juniper Forest

:: Chapter 13 Rick’s Resurface

:: Chapter 24 Conclusion Dad!! Fin.

The only thing you need to add to the structure you’ve created is words, and I have great confidence that you can do that, if you really want to.

Begin by writing a few lines beneath Chapter 1. Or, if you are not able or willing to begin with there, select another from your contents  list and find the corresponding chapter number in your manuscript construction outline. Voilà, begin typing a few lines below the chapter name.

I told you not to worry about not having an ending to your story. No ending? Please do not let this stop you. A great many writers begin writing with no ending in mind. Ordinarily, what usually happens in these circumstances is that as they write the story they become directed by its contents, continuously being edged on to chapter after chapter, and before long even the ending pleasantly presents itself.

If you’ve always wanted to write a book, please understand that you can actually choose to write the book instead of simply wanting to, the choice is yours, my friend.

The very best of luck, you are about to write your first book : )

So, you want to write your story down and turn it into a book… a novel? Let’s get started then!

I hope this is useful. Happy storytelling.

Kind regards Andi Katsina Author of  Rick & Wylie’s Fantastical, Magical Adventures www.theindieoracle.com

Readers can purchase the book in hardcopy ; http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/095557952X/ref=as_li_qf_sp_asin_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=9325&creativeASIN=095557952X

or e-version ; http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B00585CJSS/ref=as_li_qf_sp_asin_tl?ie=UTF8&camp=1789&creative=9325&creativeASIN=B00585CJSS

Transitions on Amazon…

27 Monday Aug 2012

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Now there is another way in which you can purchase Transitions – it is now listed on Amazon and can also be linked  from my Author page there.

The direct Amazon link is here…

The Amazon link means that those of you in the UK can now buy the ebook without needing to do any of that complicated maths in your head to work out the exchange rates. Alternatively, those of you who can do the maths or who want it in an alternative format to Kindle, can still get it from the publisher’s link.

Next post I promise will be about a different topic to my recent release… though I cannot promise it won’t be about politics or something equally controversial…. I may even talk about the recent photoshoot I went on. Yes, I went and did that again and had a great time so look out for that post soon.

Transitions – Release information

20 Monday Aug 2012

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Well, it is finally here…. all the hard work has come together and my novella, Transitions, is finally about to be released.

Tomorrow, in fact… but you wonderful readers of this blog get the heads up a day early and a quick sneak preview of the cover and blurb.

Click here to go to the webpage for the upcoming release

Some time soon (hopefully over the next 24 hours) this page will change to a current release and links will be added to allow you to purchase this novella as an ebook. When that happens I will do another post and give you all the links I know about for places where you may purchase it.

Note, this is an ebook release. If you want to read this novella in a more old fashioned, olde timey format such as paper you will have to wait until all the novellas in the series have been released and we put together the paperback collection of all of them. Until then, I hope you enjoy the pixelatted version…

 

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