The Dystopia in American politics

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I had promised myself that I would not comment on the current US election. Mainly because I am not an expert on politics, not least an expert in a foreign nation’s politics, and because, as someone who is not eligible to vote in the US elections*, I really do not see it as my place to comment.

However, the recent gaff made by Todd Akin and numerous other stories about the beliefs of Republican candidates and supporters made me wonder what is was that the Republican party was actually trying to achieve. It also made me worry that opinions and policies expressed over in the US often have a habit of travelling across the pond and influencing our politicians here…

Thing is, I have a feeling that these politicians are getting something seriously wrong. I think they are operating under a massive misconception which I feel someone should point out them.

The purpose fo science fiction dystopias are to scare us into not doing the things that led to the dystopia. They should not be seen as a manifesto for how you would like to see your country run.

Take The Handmaid’s Tale by Margeret Attwood. Now, I am not aware of her actual opinions on politics or the dynamics of the ‘gender war’** but I am fairly certain that when she sat down to write this stark and frightening vision of a world where women are treated like cattle she did not do so with the intention of drafting Republican party policy. I am sure her intention was something linked to perhaps warning us about the speed at which freedoms could be eroded by an unscrupulous government or the horror inherent in treating other human beings like objects. It’s a warning both to those who might be targetted by such policies and also to those who might implement them in the hope that both can work to avoid such a consequence.

Yet, by expressing such opinions as Akin has, about how there is a concept such as ‘legitimate rape’, or talking about bans on abortion and contraception, these politicians are indeed following the path which could lead to Attwood’s vision becoming a reality. Any policy or belief which implies that women are incapable of looking after their own bodies or making their own decisions should not be considered.

Ok, Akin was not, apparently, expressing the party line in this issue. Fair enough. But what he has said in my opinion represents an underlying current in the party which is certainly present. Offical policy or not, there are enough Republicans who believe this sort of nonsense and there are states in the US where it is currently illegal for a woman to get an abortion or for doctors to use certain treatments on a woman on the offchance she may be pregnant.

It leads me to wonder exactly what the purpose of government actually is. In my personal opinion I would say that it was there to make lives easier for the populace of a country, to organise things that we need such as transport and water and food and make sure that these things are clean and fairly administered. Crime prevention and the establishment of laws to promote civil order is another role they are needed for. They also allow us to pool resources in the form of taxes to make better use of said resources. Because, hey, while no one likes to pay tax, you have to admit a simple cut of your income is far better than having to fork out a hell of a lot more to pay indiviually for all the little things that governments do for you. I would even, grudgingly, admit that a government’s role may also be to defend a nation against attack though I would also say that it should not be their role to attack other nations in the name of said defence.

All these things and more I would say are the responsibility of a good government and maybe I am too much of an idealist to consider such things as being part of what modern governments do since the evidence seems to prove me wrong in many cases.

However, I would not say that the role of a government extends to imposing control over an individual’s body when that body has committed no crime other than to be born with a particular set of genes. To then hide such blatant prejudice against what amounts to 50% of the voting public behind some religious based excuses which have as much to do with faith and belief in God as their policies have with the true nature of politics smacks of cowardice.

If I were in the Republican party leadership now, I would be seeking through my membership roll for someone, anyone, who was moderate and liberal and intelligent enough to speak out about the current political issues without being sexist or homophobic. I’d then put them forward and get them to answer all questions about my policy and hope to hell none of the dinosaurs manage to outshout him or her. Only then, once this mythical and possibly non-existent Republican has got a few decent soundbites into the media, I might consider that there was a chance they might win the election. Any election. Because, frankly, from where I am sitting, you aren’t looking all that good at the moment and I will be very surprised if anyone who is female, gay or half way intelligent votes for you…

*It is a terrible oversight. Really, a person as important and intelligent as me should be automatically allowed to vote in any election I fancy so that I may share my wisdom and insights with the entire world. However, current world leaders do not seem to understand this point of view, despite my repeated letters to them explaining the situation to them. Ignorant gits could have least replied…

** Though I can guess based on her writing I would not like to presume…

Transitions on Amazon…

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Now there is another way in which you can purchase Transitions – it is now listed on Amazon and can also be linked  from my Author page there.

The direct Amazon link is here…

The Amazon link means that those of you in the UK can now buy the ebook without needing to do any of that complicated maths in your head to work out the exchange rates. Alternatively, those of you who can do the maths or who want it in an alternative format to Kindle, can still get it from the publisher’s link.

Next post I promise will be about a different topic to my recent release… though I cannot promise it won’t be about politics or something equally controversial…. I may even talk about the recent photoshoot I went on. Yes, I went and did that again and had a great time so look out for that post soon.

Transitions release

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As per my post earlier in the week, I am here to announce that Transitions, my paranormal romance novella, is now officially released in a number of ebook formats!

The link to purchase the novella from the publisher is here:

Buy Transitions now

So, anyone who wants to read this story may now do so for the very reasonable price of $2.99 (what is that in real money? I always get confused by exchange rates…) in kindle, nook and other formats.

 

Transitions – Release information

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Well, it is finally here…. all the hard work has come together and my novella, Transitions, is finally about to be released.

Tomorrow, in fact… but you wonderful readers of this blog get the heads up a day early and a quick sneak preview of the cover and blurb.

Click here to go to the webpage for the upcoming release

Some time soon (hopefully over the next 24 hours) this page will change to a current release and links will be added to allow you to purchase this novella as an ebook. When that happens I will do another post and give you all the links I know about for places where you may purchase it.

Note, this is an ebook release. If you want to read this novella in a more old fashioned, olde timey format such as paper you will have to wait until all the novellas in the series have been released and we put together the paperback collection of all of them. Until then, I hope you enjoy the pixelatted version…

 

Fire and Ice [AW Blog Chain for August]

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I have to admit that this title had me stumped. I really could not think of anything to comment upon that had happened in the world or had to do with the craft of writing which involved the concepts of fire and ice… I spent a while pondering possibilites – talking about opposites, for example, and how plots in stories often need these to create tension. However, nothing I could think of really inspired me. I mean, what has been happening in the UK recently that has involved a large flame?

Oh yeah…

Danny Boyle performed a massive ritual a week and a half ago which, according to many of my friends, transformed The Shire into Mordor and raised a massive, flaming eye above the stadium so that Sauron could get a good view of the Olympics.

How the hell could I have missed that?

Luckily, this massive ritual seems to have been successful. Not only did Sauron get his premium seat in the stadium but he seems to have blessed team GB with success. Because, suddenly, as if by magic, we are apparently good at Olympic sports*. That is some serious mojo there because, for as long as I can remember, we have always been rather middling at all sports. Plus, it cannot be denied that the Olympics, including the rather exciting wins we have had, have been a great boost to morale in the UK.

Personally, I there think that whatever sacrifice Grand Magistar of the Great Ritual, Danny Boyle, made to the Dark Lord Sauron to achieve this was definitely worth it.**

So, yes, the Olympic flame. It is actually a very powerful symbol supposed to commemorate the theft of fire from the gods by Prometheus (possibly the first theft in the same way as Cain performed the first homicide…) and is also an example (possibly the only existing modern example?) of what is known in religious/spiritual terms as an eternal flame (feel free to insert an appropriate joke about The Bangles here…). That is, a flame which is kept constantly tended and, rather than being put out and relit is passed on from vessel to vessel.

In fact, the modern Olympic flame is lit on Mount Olympus by eleven women representing Vestal Virgins using the light of the sun and is transferred to the new host country using torches lit from that original flame in one hell of a long relay race (which did pass very close to my house at one point, I think they got lost on the way as we are a few hundred miles north of the direct route between Athens and London).  There is a hell of a lot of symbolism inherent in that set up, not least the ideas of continuity and eternity. My point? Well, I joked that Danny Boyle was performing a massive magical ritual as part of his opening ceremony but in reality he actually was. The whole Olympics, from the opening ceremony to the closing ceremony, is packed with magical and religious symbols and whether you believe in gods, magic or whatever or not these symbols still have an affect on the human psyche. Psychologically, we have been programmed over our entire evolution to put significance on these things and respond to them with the appropriate level of awe. Fire is one of the strongest of these – Olympic flames, burning bushes, burnt offerings, all have been instrumental in our beliefs throughout history.

The scars in the path here were caused by flood damage. Photo taken on Monday 6th August 2012 at Drinkwater Park, Prestwich

What about Ice? Ah, you thought I had forgotten about ice…. Well, no, I hadn’t and my Olympic theme holds true. No, I am not talking about the Winter Olympics (which does seem to get forgotten in this country, not really been talked about much since the days of Torville and Dean and Eddie ‘the Eagle’ Edwards) but about the strange thing that happened the day after what has been described as our greatest Olympic day (Saturday 4th August, when we won oh so many medals). A massive storm raged over Manchester causing massive flooding in my local area. Now, summer storms are not unusual and flooding has been known to happen on occasion. However, the really freaky thing about this storm was that it hailed. Yes, hail. Lumps of ice fell from the sky in August on a day that had been very warm. Now, I am no expert on the weather but I think I am right in thinking that this was a somewhat unusual occurence. Clearly, whatever Boyle did had side effects which affected the weather… Maybe the powerful symbol of fire needed the equally powerful ice to balance it amd restore equilibrium to the universe?

So, there you have it… Fire and Ice, important psychological symbols which still impact us in the supposedly more secular and less superstitious modern age. Whether you are writing fantasy, horror, science fiction or even a simple contemporary romance you can use such concepts to induce potent emotions in your readers. Just as the Olympic flame has induced a great passion for sport among people who would not normally care.

* Yeah, ok, we were good at Beijing too but this year we are better… Of course, despite actually being third in the medals table behind the USA and China, according to the British media we are still apparently ‘winning’ the Olympics…

** Ok, yeah, I do not deny that all our athletes are incredibly talented and have worked hard at their sport. But we seem to suffer from bad luck a lot… missing out on gold by mere inches. This year, that bad luck has evaporated and it is about damn time it did.

Ok, Blog chains… this is how it works. You ‘ve read this one so now you are legally bound to read all the others. There is a special server in the MI5 building set aside *just* for tracking who reads what on this blog chain so they *will* find you out… If you fail in this task, the IOC will have to take all the gold medals away from whichever country you are from so the honour of your country depends on this! The list of participants is below….

Participants and posts:
orion_mk3 – http://nonexistentbooks.wordpress.com (link to this month’s post)
Ralph Pines – http://ralfast.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post)
areteus – https://lurkingmusings.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post)
Catherine Hall – http://theelephantinthetemple.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post)
bmadsen – http://www.bernardmadsen.com/ (link to this month’s post)
pyrosama – http://matrix-hole.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post)
magicmint – http://www.loneswing.com/ (link to this month’s post)
meowzbark – http://erlessard.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post)
tomspy77 – http://thomaswillamspychalski.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post)
BBBurke – http://www.awritersprogression.com/ (link to this month’s post)
writingismypassion – http://charityfaye.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post)
Proach – http://desstories.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post)
randi.lee – http://emotionalnovel.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post)
BigWords -http://bigwords88.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post)

[#Amwriting post] The mighty red pen of justice


Over at http://amwriting.org/ I talk about editors, in particular my own specific and recent experiences of them…. 

A direct link is here: http://amwriting.org/archives/13234

Go over there and  read it and feel free to comment.

I would also like to thank various members of the UK LRP community for being such perfect models in photographs for my recent articles on http://amwriting.org/ Big thanks and kudos to you all for being such perfect examples of what I am trying to illustrate…. 🙂

 

[Guest Post] Opposite Attraction by Judy Bagshaw

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My name is Judy Bagshaw, and I am a Canadian author of romance and romantic suspense generally featuring plus-sized heroines. I’ve been published since 1999 and currently have three ebooks available through Fictionwise, two anthologies and a novel with Draumr Publishing, a short story collection and upcoming novel with Pearlsong Press, a short in an anthology with The Wild Rose Press, two novels with Mundania Press and one with their imprint, AweStruck.

A huge thanks to David for inviting me to guest post on his blog. I’m a little new at the whole blogging thing, so can’t promise that I’ll enlighten or amaze. I do hope I’ll interest you enough to consider checking out my upcoming paranormal romance, Opposite Attraction, coming out in ebook from Mundania Press, July 24. (www.mundania.com)

David told you a bit about our project in a recent post. Basically, to recap, several authors banded together to write romance novellas featuring ghosts. Five of us saw it through to completion. We took turns critiquing each other’s work, then did rounds of editing later. We polished them up as best we could, then started looking around for a home.

Finding a home was a five year journey filled with hope, disappointment, doubt, desperation, determination, and finally exaltation. We were thrilled when Mundania Press accepted our anthology for publication. They are releasing each story in ebook format first, giving each author a month to shine on their own, then the stories will be compiled into a print anthology…likely late in the fall.

The title, Opposite Attraction, nicely sums up my story. Serena McKay, my heroine, is a skeptic…someone who has made a career from exposing frauds and con artists in the field of paranormal activity. Carter Shehan, on the other hand, is a bona fide ghost hunter. He believes. And he has spent his adult life trying to find proof of the existence of the here-after and ghostly visitors to this plane. Both have written best selling books in their respective fields, and they have locked horns more than once, both adamant that they are right.

Challenged by Carter on a nationally broadcast television talk show, Serena agrees to spend the weekend with him at the famous “haunted” Shelbourne Manor, now a museum. It’s a ‘fish or cut bait’ situation, and Serena is determined to show Carter up as just one more charlatan, while he is determined to prove to her that ghosts exist.

But of course, as with any good romance story, something unexpected happens, and you’ll have to read the story to find out how it all ends up. Let’s just say that it doesn’t hurt that Carter finds the feisty Serena very attractive. And if Serena were being honest, she would admit to more than a passing interest in the laid back Carter.

I like the idea of bringing opposites together and seeing where fate leads them, and often my heroines and heroes are at odds with each other before finding their way into each other’s heart.

You can read more about my work, including excerpts and reviews, at www.judybagshaw.com

You can also find out more about our little writing group at www.bbwromancewriters.homestead.com

[AW Blog chain post] Independence and slavery

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Independence has tumbled out of the Topicatorium for this month’s blog chain post. I think it has something to do with some celebration some country somewhere is having about something that happened a while back. I think there was a King involved, one of the Georges. And some tea party in Boston, wherever that is.

This is absolutely not a picture of the Boston Tea party.

Yet again, I demonstrate how much the education system in my country bothers with things that happen outside the UK… that or how well I paid attention in History…

Seriously, this month we have decided to talk indepenence and slavery and, until the Americans finally figure out that the Revocation of the Declaration of Independence* wasn’t actually a joke but a serious Royal Declaration, July the 4th will remain a day of Independence. My words today will be about slavery and, in particular, some very personal anecdotes on the subject.

My story starts in a pub in Birmingham. I was there for a social get together with some friends and was having dinner at the pub in question. I ordered my food and paid by card and the barman noticed my name. “Oh, that’s the same name as my grandfather’, he said. I was momentarily confused as to why ‘David’ was a noteworthy name. I mean, it’s not that uncommon. Then I realised he was talking about Lascelles which is, I have to admit, an unusual enough name. We talked for a while and it turned out that it wasn’t his grandfather’s surname that was Lascelles, it was his first name. Apparently it was quite a common name among some West Indian communities. We pondered at this for a while then shrugged it off as a strange coincidence. I ate my food, drank some beer and chatted with friends and went home thinking nothing more about it.

Fast forward a few years and we decided to attend an interesting looking exhibition at The Birmingham Museum and Art Gallery. The exhibition was about the life of Olaudah Equiano, a former slave who made a name as an author and whose autobiography was significant in the cause of the Society for Effecting the Abolition of the Slave Trade. There were artifacts and information panels about his life, his writings, the other members of the society (especially those members who were also members of the Lunar society which was a local club of intellectuals) and the slave trade in general. A lot of it was very sobering.

However, the big shock came at the end of the exhibition where there was an info panel about slaves being freed and the ways in which it could be achieved (being freed by the owner, buying their freedom, etc). Amongst all that information, it was mentioned that freed slaves often took some aspect of their owners’ name as their own. Prominent among the examples was the name Lascelles.

So, there was the explanation for the ‘mysterious coincidence’ noted in the pub that time. At some point in the past few hundred years, a family with the name Lascelles had owned slaves in the West Indies. Since they seemed to be noteworthy enough to be mentioned in a museum exhibit, they probably owned quite a few of them. The barman’s Grandfather had been named because of this tradition**.

The Battle Roll showing the knights who fought with William at the Battle of Hastings. This is not a high enough resolution copy to see it but the name is there…

Now, I have no way of knowing if the Lascelles’s who were owning slaves in the West Indies were related to me in any way. In much the same way as I have no way of knowing if I am related to the Lascelles who charged into England at Duke William’s back in 1066 and was guilty of ‘causing affray’, ‘accessory to regicide’ and theft of land (crimes they have yet to be called to account for and are unlikely ever to be). I haven’t done the geneology and don’t have the patience for it. However, seeing your own name connected with such a serious historic and social issue is rather ground shaking. I have to admit, I felt incredibly guilty, even though I personally had never condoned nor participated in the trade. I suppose the slave trade in general tends to incite strong feelings in many people, especially if you have a modern liberal outlook, and a personal link, however tenuous, makes it a hell of a lot more immediate.

This guilt was assuaged slightly in a more recent time. One of my many casual acquiantances online is a woman whose family were also involved in the slave trade. In her case she knows this involvement for definite because she has it from history passed down through the generations that several of her ancestors were slaves. We happened in the course of a long e-mail conversation to stray into the slave trade (it was quite organic – we somehow ended up on the drunken antics of Benjamin Franklin and it moved on from there…). I mentioned the above story and her comment was that, from what she had seen of the history of the trade, if a freed slave took the name of a family it was generally out of respect to the family because they had been well treated. So, I feel slightly better for that. Not much, but I take what I can get.

In many ways the slave trade was an example of how politics and economics together can cause something quite evil to be perpetuated. Greed and opportunism caused it to come into being in the first place but governments pandering to economic lobby groups and refusing to change the law for so many years was what kept it legal long after many people (like Equiano, Wilberforce, Clarkson and more) had pointed out the cruelties in the system. If there is a moral to this post beyond the obvious ‘slavery is bad’ then I think it should be to be aware of how business and governments together can conspire to create great harm. It happened with the slave trade but it is by no means a matter of history – it is still happening now.

Blog chain time again… you all know the rules by now. Read these blogs or else… er, I’ll come to all your houses and throw gravel at your neighbour’s window and claim it was you wot dun it…

Participants and posts: orion_mk3 – http://nonexistentbooks.wordpress.com (link to this month’s post) knotanes – http://knotane.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post) meowzbark – http://erlessard.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post) Ralph Pines – http://ralfast.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post) randi.lee – http://emotionalnovel.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post) writingismypassion – http://charityfaye.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post) pyrosama – http://matrix-hole.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post) bmadsen – http://hospitaloflife.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post) dclary – http://davidwclary.com (link to this month’s post) Poppy – http://poet-slash-writer.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post) areteus – https://lurkingmusings.wordpress.com/ (link to this month’s post) Sweetwheat – http://gomezkarla.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post) ThorHuman – http://knikriverstatic.com/ (link to this month’s post) Tex_Maam – http://tex-maam.blogspot.com/ (link to this month’s post) MelodySRV – http://createamelody.com/ (link to this month’s post)

* Yeah, that version is very out of date. They need to update it with the new PM. Tell you what, you give us Obama and you can have Cameron and Clegg. Two for the price of one offer, can’t say fairer than that. I think Obama would much prefer governing here, we already have the medical health care system he wanted and no one will claim he is an illegal alien because he comes from Hawaii. Just to check, though: Obama does come with the entire US government budget, right? Cos, you know, we could do with that money right now…

** I very much doubt he himself was a slave, given the timings involved, but these traditions do get passed along family lines and it is possible he was named for his Grandfather or Great Grandfather.

Fantasy Photoshoot – The end (or is it?)

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Earlier this week I got the CD of images from Quattrofoto for the fantasy photoshoot studio session. Unlike previously published photos, which were either mine or Lucy’s ‘photostory’ of the day in the studio or ‘rough cuts’ with little or no editing, these were the final versions of the shots with all the special effects and photostudio tricks added to them. In fact, the person who did the editing (the wonderful Isabella Favilli) did admit they went somewhat mad with special effects on this one mainly because it was a fantasy theme.

Some of the changes are subtle, very subtle. A change of eye colour can be seen in some of them, for example.

can you spot the difference between these two images?

 

Click the photo to get a closer look at them…

Others are far more blatant. For example, in this shot we have a little more magic added to an already fascinating lighting effect.

Sparkles!

Here we have some magical sparkles added to the object our Druid is holding in his hand (it was actually a glass pot stuffed with grass and leaves to represent a selection of herbs) which were definitely not there when the photo was taken.

If anyone is curious about how these effects were achieved, you are going to be out of luck asking me. I know nothing about it. However, if you do have any burning questions, I am happy to pass them onto Isabella for you. I can’t guarantee she will answer but I can pass them on. Feel free to leave a comment with the questions…

In all, I am very pleased with the way this has come out. The shots have come out better than expected, but then I would expect that when using a professional instead of a rank amateur like myself.

So, this is the final post I will make about the day we spent in a photostudio. However, ‘adventures in fantasy photography’ is far from over. Plans are already afoot for the next stage which will be the location shoot, which we hope to manage to get done sometime before the end of summer. Provided, that is, the rain stops long enough for us to get the cameras out from under the waterproofing. It also depends on me managing to acquire all of a long list of esoteric items to use as costume and props and some more innocent victims to force at gunpoint to stand in front of a camera. However, at the time of writing, things are coming together so there may be more to report very soon…

Announcement: Transitions

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I have over the past few weeks made barely veiled references to ‘some news’ which will be made public over the next month or two. There has also been a vague request for a cover designer which may have given some people clues as to what is occuring.

Well, I am now going to reveal the news that I have been wanting to reveal for many many years now… more years than this blog has existed, in fact, news that has awaited announcing since the dark times BB*.

I have a release date for Transitions, my Paranormal romance novella. It is currently a ‘tentative’ release date but it is an actual date written down in an official schedule in actual pixels and everything and the chances are it will be firmed up sometime soon as it is basically only tentative because the final edits were still underway. Those edits have been completed and submitted and accepted so there is nothing for me to do now but sit and wait for things to happen…

The current release date (for the ebook version) stands at the 21st of August, 2012.

I am currently awaiting a mail with a cover design attached to it. I know that is underway because I have had an e-mail telling me that the artist wanted me to change permissions on my Flickr account so she could see some photos I took for reference of one of the locations I use. As soon as I have that cover, I will post it for you all to see.

In the meantime, sometime over the next few weeks (the 24th of July according to the most recent estimates) the first novella in that collection will get its release. Judy Bagshaw’s Opposite Attraction will be out for you to buy and read and we will have Judy herself on this blog taking a guest spot.

Then, after my release in August, we have three other novellas from the same anthology, one a month. I will release details of these when I know the order but I do know that Skyla Dawn Cameron is going to be the final author in this list and everything she writes is awesome**.

Finally, if all goes to plan, there will be a print publication of all of the novellas

Oh, and in case you might be confused… the cover designer I asked for recently is not doing the cover for Transitions or any of the above novellas. That is amply covered by the contract with the publisher. They are doing the cover design for a freebie story called The Curse we produced as a group when putting together the anthology. It was originally intended to be included in the print anthology but it would have made the book too big to be economically viable. So, we decided to self publish it and use it for giveaways.  I will be posting details of how you might get a hold of a copy of that later too…

More news will be posted here as and when I get it.

*BB = Before Blog. A time when I only had Live Journal, Facebook, Twitter, the telephone, letter writing, semaphore and actually talking to people face to face as methods for communication. How we managed to talk to each other in those primitive times of Pre-2010 I will never know…

** Seriously, I Beta read her entry for this anthology and it was awesome when I read it as a first draft. It was the first thing I have ever beta read where I literally had no changes to suggest. I had to nit pick to the nth level just to have something to say beyond ‘this is perfect’ so she knew I had actually bothered to read it. The version you are getting has been edited even more so I am sure it will be even more awesome. She designs covers too.